compare to first log.

''Holy saint peter,'' he smiled to him self on the way home, ''there are my three deeds! I've befriended a pagan heretic, saved the virtue of a barmaid, and given comfort to a murder. If this was thy will, hold me excused, for I am only a fool.''




My writing has grown sense my first log, by spelling and sentences structure. In my first one I all ways said the same word, but spelled it wrong. In my first log I had simple, for the most part, sentences so the main part were in the front. Now I know to try to put them towards the back.